Last week me and my family went for a trip up north for 2 weeks in a car. It took us 16 hours to get there. But when we were hathway there we saw lots of people crowding next to a big red light. So my family and I decided to go and see what's happening. When we got out of the car we saw huge waves splashing on the side of the rocks It was like a tsunami.The big waves were wetting everyone because it was so big I tried to run away from it but it still got me and my family wet. Luckily we had some spare clothes in the car. After we all got changed we got in the car and kept on going on our trip.
Kia ora Paul,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing with our literacy class this week. I love that you were able to check out the tsunami and get safely away - this is the fun part of being a writer - you can make the action happen as you like!
Keep using your imagination Paul!
Take care,
Ms. Tapuke